EVALUATION

QUESTION 2
What have you learned from your audience feedback?


The target audience for our video would be people who listen to florence and the machine and similar artists such as ...


Example of our audience..

name:eleanor
age:17
lives:harlow
music:kings of leon, florence and the machine, paloma faith
shop:topshop,h&m,vintage shops
place to go:london

This is what the artisit Florence and the machine looks like

We looked at many outfits and clothes that she has worn to get an ideo of what clothes we shsould dress our artist in when filming.

We chose a dress and a fur jacket, this is unusual like her style and vintage looking, like girly with a twist. This owuld appeal to our audience if they liked her style then it may encourage them to watch the video. so i think we acheived the overall feeling of the look.

We posted our video onto facebook and you tube. We got a few comments on facebook, but none really with helpful critisism only comments such as "good job" which would not help us in what we needed to improve on. Our teacher showed her friends and they gave us good comments which we could use and think about, a main point that was mentioned was that the setting of London had no rela relevance in the story, I can see why they thought this but we decided to film here to add locations which everyone woud know and could link to where the artist is from.

Also another point that was mentioned was the syncing of the lips and knocking on the screen at the very start of the video when florence is in the television was not that good, we had to time the knocking when we made the knocking noise as we had to film the scene then burn it onto a disc and play it whilst filming it and then put the knocking ound over it which we had to do a few times but this was alot better than our previous attempts.

The feedback that we got from our teachers friends helped us in evaluationg our workk whereas comments on face book did not help very much. Also we didnt get that many comments so a problem with this is that is may be unrealiable, so it better to ask people directly to comment, that is what i have learnt when managing feed back.